Good story, could have used a midget and a goat but hey what do I know :-)

Thanks for sharing
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Howdy folks, long time no see. But I have a favor, I wrote a story
and I would like for you to read and tell me what you think. Here is
the thing, I am trying to develop a way of telling short stories that
are both entertaining and informative. This short story is called,
"The Challenge", but it is meant to be a primer on fishing jig-n-pig
in deepwater. It is my first attempt at this type of thing, but
please be honest in your assessment.

http://fishingbass.home.comcast.net/thechallenge.html


Its a good story. The mixing of tenses would upset an english teacher,
but then you weren't writing for most english teahcers anyway,




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