"Ken Fortenberry" wrote in message
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wrote:
... It is my first attempt at this type of thing, but
please be honest in your assessment.

Don't quit your day job.


He could benefit from a nice college level composition class or two, but it
was a good story. I was not in tears at the end, and it was a bit mamby
pamby, but I could feel what he was trying to say, and most importantly I
enjoyed reading it. Kinda like a serious side of Harry & Charlie.

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Bob La Londe
Fishing Arizona & The Colorado River
Fishing Forums & Contests
http://www.YumaBassMan.com


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Ken Fortenberry



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