The Challenge

Group: rec.outdoors.fishing.bass Date: Tue, Feb 6, 2007, 6:56pm (CST-2)
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Howdy folks, long time no see. * But I have a favor, I wrote a story
and I would like for you to read and tell me what you think. Here is the
thing, I am trying to develop a way of telling short stories that are
both entertaining and informative. This short story is called, "The
Challenge", but it is meant to be a primer on fishing jig-n-pig in
deepwater. It is my first attempt at this type of thing, but please be
honest in your assessment.
http://fishingbass.home.comcast.net/thechallenge.html
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I read your story, my literary skills are somewhat limited...the cute
little blonde that sat in front of me in english class was a bit of a
distraction. But I will say that you told a pretty fair story, keep at
it. The world can always use some more good story tellers .

John