Da wrote:
Have not been around for a month. I have taken some advises to revise
my pattern a little bit even though some advises are too harsh. ...

It's never been clear to me just what you're all about.

Are you a beginning tier tying flies for personal use
or are you looking for a free critique of a commercial
offering ?

If the former, nice looking fly. If the latter, you
can go to hell and take your overdressed fly with you.

--
Ken Fortenberry