On Aug 26, 7:12*pm, Todd wrote:
On 08/26/2010 12:57 PM, Sullivan wrote:

© Sullivan the Poet 2010

'Astalk the Peal..' by Sullivan the Poet
from the forthcoming collection 'Bronze Bell Jack..'

* *Cornish Goddess of the rivers and streams

*Cornish name for Sea Trout

Hi Sullivan,

Thank you for sharing.

Oh man am I going to take a lot of crap for what I am
about to write. *I really mean no offense. *I found
the poem difficult to read and even more difficult
to try and figure out what you are trying to say. *But,
I may be alone in this as I really, really do not
like poetry to start with, except Cowboy Poetry,
which I adore.

The poem seems to be well suited to a female audience,
better than a male audience. *If females are
your audience, I think your book will do well. *If
guys are your audience, I would study Cowboy Poetry
and point your writing in that direction.

Remember that guy have a short attention span, we
are always hungry, we always want to play, we don't
speak, and we don't listen to a word you say.

Good luck on your book!

-T

You don't know much about women. I suspect you are not one of them.

On the other hand, you don't know much about men either.

Hm.....

g.